I always liked the play on Nooj and Shuyin, and what that must have done inside of Nooj's head. I think you convey this really well here, with the sudden attraction to Yuna, and then later not remembering why he was so attracted to her. Interesting concept, watching her with dresspheres (two /s/es?), and how Shuyin reacted only to one of them. Cool, cool. I'd forgotten how fascinating the Nooj/Shuyin concept was.