I like the final action and the significance that you place on it in this drabble by placing it at the end. Nooj's final gesture is a symbolic attempt to cover up what happened, which is exactly what Shuyin would want.

I like that you chose to describe this scene from Nooj's perspective. It must have been horrific for him certainly. I like that his first action is to call for help, when he has some of his senses back again.