This is obviously such a tragic story and that is because of its setting. I like the way that you incorporate another piece of story we have heard before in the game, Chappu's plans to marry Lulu some time in the future that won't come.

I like the way you have made Beclem intoi someone Chappu can confide in, but still kept him fairly stern and serious. I don't think it likely he was ever a *very* frivolous sort of person , or if so that day was likely far in his past.