ext_65778 ([identity profile] mneme-forgets.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owlmoose 2006-06-14 04:59 pm (UTC)

Anotehr highly enjoyable read. I really love the way that you and cupcakemonster have been showing how Rikku makes an excellent foil to Nooj's character.

I love the way that Rikku is all ready for another gratuitous fling because she is bored.

I adore the way that Nooj is almost unable to resist his sheer physical attraction to her, but he does.

I like the way that Rikku starts out insulted that she has been pushed away and annoyed that Nooj took their argument seriously. I love her quick fit of temper, the slamming of the door and the way she instantly pops back.

I really love how she ends up giving Nooj and Paine her blessings in a way. I think you've portrayed Rikku's amazing elastic mood swings excellently well. I like the idea of her that way. Once again your write wonderful dialogue. I greatly enjoyed this.

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