http://rustehroll.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] rustehroll.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owlmoose 2006-06-16 05:33 am (UTC)

Hmm. It's really not often that I sit down and look at a piece and think "why the fuck did I not write this?", y'know?

But that's what I think. Why the fuck did I not write this? Maybe because I was really stuck on Rikku not developing any feelings and to me, in this piece, she has. Rikku herself is not able to not get attached, because she's got a big heart and even the ever-grumpy Nooj seems to have been enveloped here. And that really makes me happy in a lot of ways.

If you'll recall that aim log, I was quite a lot the giddy girl at the time, and still... gah. I am. I've reread this countless times and just kinda wanna snuggle up to them both and go "losers, it could've worked for both of you,but you were both convinced it WOULDN'T so it didn't."

I feel like, here, they looked so ahrd at the grond to avoid tripping that the ended up tripping in the end anyway. Ouch. Reality (and gravity) hurts.

I kinda wish there had been a different ending to this.

You make it painfulgood like spicy tuna sashimi. Hmm. I have to think more on this.

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