I am convinced me coming to comment on this story will totally guilt you into writing more! Soon!

My silly fangirl crush on Beclem probably biased me to this story from the beginning, but I really like him here. He and Nooj play off each other well (end of the story, last comments: lawl!) I think it was pretty neat how you showed Auron's words having such an impact on Beclem. It's a bit of a horrifying awakening for him in a lot of ways, and this comes across very well.

So now all you have to do is write more. *urges* >.>