ext_51168 ([identity profile] muggy-mountain.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owlmoose 2007-05-14 03:17 am (UTC)

DAYUMN.

Damn, damn, damn, d-

Wow.

You packed every inch and vacuum-sealed it.

So complex and so rightly Kinoc. We can read it that he's being the good man here; trying to break Auron's heart for his own good. And yet he's just unhinged by Auron's presence. So powerful, so real, so choreographed. The movement is all Kinoc's, and the reader is sort of put in Auron's place --stunned, paralyzed and left to wonder.

Bravo^8687.

THANKSMUCH.

Post a comment in response:

This account has disabled anonymous posting.
If you don't have an account you can create one now.
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
More info about formatting

If you are unable to use this captcha for any reason, please contact us by email at support@dreamwidth.org