Oooh, I love it! I could feel the tension as he turned his back... fabulous. I liked the imagery of a heart slamming into a ribcage -- I know that feeling!
Which backstory tidbit is this? Either I wasn't paying enough attention or something else has forced it out of my mental space. Must. Know!
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Which backstory tidbit is this? Either I wasn't paying enough attention or something else has forced it out of my mental space. Must. Know!