Thank you, very much. :) I paid a lot of attention to the balance between softening Ashe too much and showing her in a vulnerable moment, so I'm glad you think that works.
Ah, my long and complex sentences... I know about those, and do keep an eye out for them. I particularly find myself using them more when I'm trying to write in a more formal voice, such as Ashe's POV. I'm glad that you didn't find them a major issue, but it's a good reminder.
And thank you!! :D This was a marvelous surprise and I tip my hat to everyone involved. <3
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Ah, my long and complex sentences... I know about those, and do keep an eye out for them. I particularly find myself using them more when I'm trying to write in a more formal voice, such as Ashe's POV. I'm glad that you didn't find them a major issue, but it's a good reminder.
And thank you!! :D This was a marvelous surprise and I tip my hat to everyone involved. <3