I don't find it too long in and of itself, it's just out of sync with the other chapters. Almost fifteen hundred words longer than average for this particular story. Most AGL chapters are around 7 pages in MS Word; this one is over 10. I probably shouldn't care so much about consistency, but I can't help it. :)
I was really worried that just writing up canon was going to be dull, for myself and for the reader, but actually I'm rather enjoying doing it. It's fun to imagine events from Auron's point of view.
Thank you for the review. I think half the reason I chose Auron as my subject is for the sheer pleasure of writing from the POV of a character who can say lines like the one you called out!
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I was really worried that just writing up canon was going to be dull, for myself and for the reader, but actually I'm rather enjoying doing it. It's fun to imagine events from Auron's point of view.
Thank you for the review. I think half the reason I chose Auron as my subject is for the sheer pleasure of writing from the POV of a character who can say lines like the one you called out!