I enjoy the way that while you did not ignore Tidus' presence in these short pieces you didn't make it overwhelming or depressing.
I like the way that Yuna compared herself to Spira. It reminded me of the boys' metaphors when they're speaking in Luca Stadium.
I love the hint that Baralai has been pursuing Yuna with no luck. I like the way he seems so grateful for the graceful way she gives in.
I pity Baralai a little for having to live up to Tidus - a sort of whirlwind love affair that took place suring very trying times. It's the sort of thing that makes people very close in a very short period of time. But what I love about this second drabble is the hint that such emotions can prove to be false, or at least not as strong as they appeared at first. It makes me wonder if Yuna and Tidus would really have worked out after all and that's interesting.
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I like the way that Yuna compared herself to Spira. It reminded me of the boys' metaphors when they're speaking in Luca Stadium.
I love the hint that Baralai has been pursuing Yuna with no luck. I like the way he seems so grateful for the graceful way she gives in.
I pity Baralai a little for having to live up to Tidus - a sort of whirlwind love affair that took place suring very trying times. It's the sort of thing that makes people very close in a very short period of time. But what I love about this second drabble is the hint that such emotions can prove to be false, or at least not as strong as they appeared at first. It makes me wonder if Yuna and Tidus would really have worked out after all and that's interesting.