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KJ ([personal profile] owlmoose) wrote2006-11-09 12:26 am
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Silly little drabble

Fandom: FFX
Rating: G
Wordcount: 100
Characters: Rikku
Pairings: n/a
Spoilers: not really
Notes: I stumbled across this half-written WIP a couple of days ago. Can't remember where I was planning to go with it, but it seemed to want to be finished. So I obliged.


Rikku was bored.

They'd been running around the Calm Lands in circles for hours now, trying to find a Malboro. Where she came from, you ran away from Malboros, not toward them, but whatever; Tidus was determined to get that reward from the monster arena guy and she wasn't exactly in a position to complain, not after she'd insisted on chasing all those butterflies around the other day.

Grumbling, she peered through the goggles she'd almost forgotten about. There! over by the cliff edge. And with a shout she took off running, irritation forgotten in the thrill of the chase.

[identity profile] rustehroll.livejournal.com 2006-11-09 08:30 am (UTC)(link)
ZOMG! RIKKU! :D This is so very Rikku. Hahahaha. I especially love how you start it, it's an immediate bang. The ending feels a little less smack-me-in-the-face than some of your other writing has done, but altogether I like how this piece fits.

It's a well crafted drabble! THANK YOU :D Meee, happy.
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[identity profile] auronlu.livejournal.com 2006-11-10 11:48 am (UTC)(link)
Ooo, shinies!

A thought which seems brilliant, only at 4AM:
Rikku, cat person.