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KJ ([personal profile] owlmoose) wrote2010-03-02 11:10 am
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Alphabet Fic Meme: "Trustworthy"

Title: Trustworthy
Fandom: FFX-2
Rating: G
Wordcount: about 1000
Characters: Baralai, Nooj
Spoilers: Minor. Set post-game.
Notes: Written for the Alphabet Fic Meme, to [info - personal] renay's request of "Baralai/Nooj, rarities". Probably more gen than she was thinking, but the theme is there at least, if you turn your head sideways and squint a little. Let's just say this isn't exactly where the fic was planning to go when I started.it, although I'm pretty happy with where it ended up.


The door clicked shut behind the last of the Guado, and Baralai leaned back in his desk chair and rubbed his eyes. Why on earth had he volunteered to help broker their negotiations with the Ronso? No treaty was worth this level of aggravation.

The commsphere in the wall behind him started to make the jangling noise that he was already learning to hate. For a second, he considered ignoring it; then he considered tossing it out the window. He imagined the pleasure of ripping it out of its socket, hurling it through the glass, watching it fly through the air and then hit the bay of Luca, where it would sink beneath the waves, never to trouble him again.

It was a pretty dream, and he allowed himself to savor it. Then he reached out with his right hand, not opening his eyes, and tapped the infernal device just hard enough to take the call. "Yes?"

"Meyvn Nooj to see you, sir," came the nasal voice of his new assistant.

"Send him in." Baralai tapped the commsphere a second time to end the transmission, then sat up and pulled off his headband, combing through his hair with his fingers before setting it back in place. He didn't bother checking his reflection in the window glass -- he probably wasn't all that presentable, but Nooj had seen him in worse conditions.

The door opened to reveal first the assistant -- Baralai could not for the life of him remember the man's name; he would have to fix that problem sooner rather than later -- and then Nooj, leaning heavily on his cane. Nooj looked as tired and frustrated as Baralai felt, his eyes drawn, hair falling limply into his face.

"Have a seat." Baralai gestured to one of the chairs in the left-hand corner of the room, then raised his eyebrows at the aide, who got the message and pulled the chair closer to the front of Baralai's desk. Nooj lowered himself into the seat as Baralai nodded to the aide; he left, closing the door behind him. "So. I suppose I can guess from your expression how your side of the negotiations went today."

Nooj grunted an assent. "Save me from ever having to work with Ronso again. The Elder is affable enough, but those hot-tempered seconds of his... you're fortunate to have drawn the Guado."

Baralai's answering laugh was hollow. "You can believe that if you like." He shook his head with a sigh. "Let's just hope they're all getting it out of their system before we bring them together next week."

"Indeed." Nooj stiffened his back, raising his chin level with the floor. "But I didn't come here to rehash the events of today. I have something for you." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a sphere, then held it out to Baralai, who took it.

Baralai balanced the sphere on his palm, felt its weight. "What's on it?"

Nooj pushed his glasses up his nose. "It's the sphere of Shuyin and Vegnagun that the Gullwings stole from Kilika Temple and then delivered to the Youth League."

"Really?" Baralai jerked his head back in surprise; imperceptibly, he hoped, although from the smug quirk of Nooj's mouth that appeared, then vanished, he doubted it. "Why give it to me?"

"It's time." Nooj sat back in his chair and tapped the head of his cane with his index finger, the dull ring of the sound loud in Baralai's small office. "When you first suggested your plan to create a sphere library, I resisted the idea of collecting so much of Spira's history in one place."

Baralai held back a derisive snort. Resisted might be one way of putting it; that had been the first day of his own negotiations with the Youth League, and from Nooj's reaction to the idea, he had thought Nooj might walk away from the bargaining table and never look back. The suggestion had been withdrawn before the end of the hour. "I recall," he said.

Still tapping the cane, Nooj turned his head, looked out the window. "I've changed my mind. There's no logical reason not to create a single repository of spheres for potential researchers as long as it has a guardian that can be trusted." He turned back to meet Baralai's eyes. "And I trust you. To be that guardian, and to set up safeguards such that all future guardians of the library will be equally trustworthy." Nooj nodded at the sphere. "Let that be the first in your collection. I will make arrangements to have the rest of the Youth League's spheres to be sent to Bevelle directly."

"No." Baralai shook his head. "Not to Bevelle."

Nooj had started to rise from his seat, and he paused, half standing, and shot a quizzical glance at Baralai, raising an eyebrow.

"Not Bevelle," Baralai repeated. "The temples are too strongly associated with the keeping of secrets, with the destruction of history. I would not raise the specter of Yevon or of Trema. No. The sphere library will be here, in Luca. New Yevon and the Youth League will build it together, and together we will come up with a plan for its maintenance. And let that be a legacy that stands for a thousand years."

Nooj sank back down in his chair and said nothing for a long moment. When he moved again, it was to hold out his right hand. "Thank you for proving that I was right to trust you."

Baralai clasped Nooj's right hand, accepting the gesture of partnership. "And thank you for honoring me with that trust." He caught Nooj's eyes again, and smiled. "To the future."

"To the future," Nooj agreed. With a quick squeeze, he released Baralai's hand, then stood. "See you tomorrow."

"Good night," Baralai replied; once Nooj had left, he picked up the sphere again, and held it up to the window, picturing the building that would house this treasure and a thousand more, finally hopeful for Spira's future as well as its past.

[identity profile] angeltaisha.livejournal.com 2010-03-02 10:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Well done!

[identity profile] owlmoose.livejournal.com 2010-03-02 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :)
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[identity profile] auronlu.livejournal.com 2010-03-03 01:20 am (UTC)(link)
I am struck by just how difficult it is (at least for me) to envision where societies and characters go after the story ends. I was going to say, "Happily ever after," but X-2 leaves us just past a point of crisis: things are not yet fixed.

I am consistently struck by how you manage to extrapolate and keep going, figuring out where the Youth League and New Yevon would go.

I love the idea of Baralai and Nooj drawing straws to try and negotiate between the Guado and Ronso.

And it is indeed very touching/telling that Nooj would bring that very sphere to Baralai, and that he would have to overcome some resistance before agreeing to the idea of a sphere library. Baralai's suggestion is sensible and sensitive. (He is such a thoughtful young man. I regret the fact that my own writing keeps losing that central aspect of him).

And it took me until this piece to notice the connection between your librarian avocation and sphere collecting in FFX/2.

[identity profile] owlmoose.livejournal.com 2010-03-03 07:54 am (UTC)(link)
"But what happened next?" is probably the question I have been most drawn to as a fan, in whatever media I consume: books, movies, TV shows, games, whatever. (Given that, it's pretty amazing that it took me as long to start writing fanfic as it did.) The drive to answer that question for FFX-2 is what got me started writing my very first fic, and it still pulls at me today. I sketched one possible future for Spira in "A Guardian's Legacy", but since that was really Auron's story, I didn't develop my ideas that much, and I've only revisited it in shorts since. If I can come up with a good plot to match, I may delve more deeply into Spira's future someday.

Anyway. Thank you! I agree that Baralai is thoughtful and sensitive, although in my conception of him, those aspects of his personality get mixed in with his natural gift for navigating politics and a touch of desire for power.

Can't you just see me as Spira's pre-eminent sphere librarian? ;) Might be a fun job, might get me killed...

[identity profile] wildejoy.livejournal.com 2010-03-03 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
I love the way they interact in this. Tentative but warm, and it's just so true to them. Especially your Nooj; I have the hardest time writing Nooj. I mostly avoid it. You write him beautifully.

He imagined the pleasure of ripping it out of its socket, hurling it through the glass, watching it fly through the air and then hit the bay of Luca, where it would sink beneath the waves, never to trouble him again.

It was a pretty dream, and he allowed himself to savor it. Then he reached out with his right hand, not opening his eyes, and tapped the infernal device just hard enough to take the call. "Yes?"


Oh, Baralai. ♥

Small typo, though: you've got 'will built it together' instead of 'build'

[identity profile] owlmoose.livejournal.com 2010-03-03 07:44 am (UTC)(link)
You picked out my favorite part. ;)

Thanks! I have always enjoyed writing the interactions of any of the CS4; this particular pair is probably the one I've done the least with, and I should play with them more. They have a friends/rivals dynamic that I find very interesting.

You're right about the typo; oops. *heads off to fix*
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[personal profile] lassarina 2010-03-05 12:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, these two.

and yes, Baralai, I agree with you completely about phones. Or things that are like phones. *nods*

I like the moment of trust tipping over, how hard it would be for Nooj to come here and cede control of a sphere--and how Baralai acknowledges that, and the reasons for it, and then makes it easier. Prrrrrrrr.

[identity profile] owlmoose.livejournal.com 2010-03-06 10:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! Baralai is, as I write him, very thoughtful, understanding, good at dealing with people -- and a political creature who knows how to turn any situation to his advantage. I see no conflict in this combination at all. ;)
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[personal profile] renay (from livejournal.com) 2010-03-06 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
HA HA, I GET AN AWESOME FIC. *takes it, makes out with a little*

I love the threads of friendship between them here, the trust and the fondness that's grown back between them. Baralai not caring that Nooj is going to see him less than perfectly polished! Nooj's limp hair!

I could shake my fist at you, though! Sphere library! I want that idea! Except I don't really want to write it, maybe, because I am lazy. Based on this maybe I will give you all my ideas and then start giving you the eye every few weeks. Luca is an interesting choice. I think the future of Spira is fascinating in how we all choose which cities become hubs, and this is really interesting! Where does it goooo, KJ! TELL ME.

re: comments above, you'd be an AWESOME sphere librarian. ;)

[identity profile] owlmoose.livejournal.com 2010-03-06 10:00 pm (UTC)(link)
I have played with a lot of things about Spira's future, but one thing that stays consistent is Luca as the new nexus, because it's the closest thing Spira has to neutral ground -- ever notice that no matter what else is going on the world, the different races and factions keep peacefully playing the game together? So it seems logical to me that people and institutions would drift there, whether accidentally or on purpose.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. :)