http://kjswritinglog.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kjswritinglog.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] owlmoose 2005-06-21 07:40 pm (UTC)

Re: Chap 21 feedback

Thanks for the forum link, I will check that out for sure!

I don't have the spheres memorized, but I remember them pretty well and found a good script for them. Unfortunately, I'm not anywhere near a game save where I could pick them up and watch them again.

In response to point one, I plan to carry Auron's story on through its end. So that does mean covering Braska's pilgrimage, and Yuna's as well, but I don't intend to detail every step of the way (in Ch. 22, which is largely written, I jump from Macalania to Luca, for example. And in Luca, I'm just telling my own story, not writing out the sphere). I only intend to include the parts of the pilgrimages that directly relate to Auron's life story as I'm telling it.

As for point two, I agree -- not much is made of that in the US version of the game (don't know if that's the same as the International version), but it seems to be a key thing, and I'm going to explore it a little bit, although not too much since Jecht isn't my main character.

I am really glad that you're liking the story, and I hope it continues to live up to expectations!

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