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KJ ([personal profile] owlmoose) wrote2005-07-25 05:30 am

update

Ten is up. I put a lot of thought into this one and am very curious to see reactions.

Eleven is a little over half drafted, I think.

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[identity profile] kunstarniki.livejournal.com 2005-07-25 01:08 pm (UTC)(link)
How about a reaction where I just stand, stunned and shivering from the absolute 'rightness' of what you have written? G-d, I wish I could get into a woman's skin the way you can! Every line of her response is so true, so inevitable, so perfect I cannot ever again think of it in another way. You have shown with total clarity how a self-centered act casts its repercussions through the world of which it is a part. Extraordinary and very, very beautiful. "Every caress feel like a blow?" Your words are flawlessly chosen and placed. I bow.