"Desert Cold" - new Paine fic

[owlmoose]

Title: Desert Cold
Fandom: FFX-2
Rating: NC-17 (yes, really)
Wordcount: 442
Pairing: Paine/Nooj
Spoilers: Not really; I suppose you could say minor ones for Paine's backstory
Notes: Written for 30_fantasies, Theme #10, Ice. A departure for me in many respects, so feedback, including crit, is even more welcome than usual.

"She had expected the desert to be hot, and it is during the day, but the nights are cold, harsh winds sweeping in as soon as the sun goes down, stars glittering overhead like shards of ice."

Comments

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[kunstarniki.livejournal.com]

KJ - I left a comment on this story and saw that another person had done so as well. Now they both seemed to have disappeared. Did you mask them? LJ is acting very strangely these days.

Re: I

[owlmoose.livejournal.com]

Bizarre. I got both comments in my email, and saw them on the page, earlier this morning. Now I can't even get the page to load. It must be LJ weirdness. Hopefully everything will show up properly soon. Thanks for the heads-up!