new chapter

[owlmoose]

I had been having trouble deciding how the structure of the next few chapters of AGL was going to work, but the answer hit me in the shower this morning. So I spent the next hour rearranging some things and planning some others, and now Chapter 33 is up.

Now all I want to do is stay right here and keep working on all the other pieces that fell into place for me, but no, I have to go to work. Stupid work.

Comments

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[kunstarniki.livejournal.com]

Yes, I keep seeing Liss and Brianna as much the same - because you made them parallel in a comment. It is not easy to construct a valid young character when there is what amounts to an older counterpart who is more vital. Heh?

Re: I

[owlmoose.livejournal.com]

You are exactly right, that it the difficulty. I've made every effort not to make Liss simply a young female Auron, but in the process I may have sapped some of her vitality. I did give her a few bits of her mother -- the eyes, a temper that burns cold -- but there hasn't been much opportunity to display them. Maybe further on in the story, although I'm not sure how much there is left.